Monday, April 12, 2010

I'll be there for you...


My world is incomplete without you...
You mean the world to me...with you everything is bright and breezy...the music is no sweeter when you are far away from me...my morning is hollow, if it starts without a glimpse at your face when you are sleeping innocently...

I will ensure my touch is tender when I wake you up, just like I touch a delicate tower of playing cards...my observation power is futile if I don’t notice the silky tresses of yours when you have just got up and you gently place them back behind your ears...I am a fool if I don’t enjoy reading the back half of the news paper while you read the front...I am as feeling less as a stone if I don’t notice the care with which you push your coffee mug towards me, so that we can share it as one...I am stupid if I don’t notice that you need water, after an overcooked breakfast which I prepared and you still have a tranquil smile on your lips, just for me...I am unworthy of you if I don’t relish every single moment of being with you on hours and hours and hours of shopping, even though I detest it the most...
I vow I wouldn’t mind wasting up my time with you, dusting besides you, even when I know everything is already as dirt-free as it can be...I’ll sincerely learn cooking so that I can cook for you when you are back after an exhausting day, and you still smile calmly at me so that I feel good...I’ll try to remember every single date that has an importance in your life so that I can be your little calendar...I’ll clean up my room so that every single breath you take is as fresh as a newly blooming rose, even though I hate to clean...I will make sure my television volume is low in night so that I don’t wake you up from your profound sleep...I’ll let you take my popcorn despite the fact that I don’t like to share it with anyone...I’ll never look at any beautiful girl passing by since I know only you’ll be there for me with a spoon of cold syrup, when I am suffering from harsh chill...
I’ll firmly stand besides you because I know you’ll feel safest around me, even when the whole world is against...I assure you I’ll fill up the gap between your fingers, when you stand totally confused in the hurly burly of a boisterous traffic...I swear I will never forget your birthday even though, to me you never look any older...
At times when you are away...the most appealing sound I’ll remember is the sound of your vivacious laugh...the folded pages in the novel, you once read, reminds me of you...the falling rain drops, spattering from the window, reminds me of you...I’ll miss you over and over again, when there is no one to tell me, where my shoes are...I’ll miss you often because you never bothered to check your diary when we arrange for a meet...
I miss you, your bubbly way of talking, the mole on your left cheek...I think of you all the time...without you the world seems incomplete...without you, even I am incomplete...
I like you...I will always like you for what you are because you make me feel special, you give a whole new meaning to the word happiness and for me you are happiness...I love u not for what u are but for what I am when I am with you...
I hope my dream comes true...I just want to be besides you and then ill dream again to see how far it can take me through...
P.S.  This post is special to me for many reasons, one of them is that one of my dearest friend in college (name under cover as per the request) is going to propose to the girl he likes a lot (from years) with the help of this small bit...

11 comments:

  1. Seriously the best of the lot...!!! makes you remember all the lovey dovey romantic movies but still stands out from all of them due to the mere fact of the feel of a long time relation with the effervesence of a bubble ....

    Great attention to the small small things which we miss in our daily lives with the one we cherish....

    But THE most important thing which impresses is the sound of CONVICTION it has...!!!

    Koi sach mein hai kya??????

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  2. oyee senti bhai ye kya ho gaya tujhe :O peilu hai yaar :) :) tu collg se jaate time ye sab likh raha hai koi gultan to ni naa pasand aa gayi bhai tujhe :P waise woh last mein kis bande ki baat kar rahe ho??ab kaha time rakha hai bolo saale ko jaane

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  3. amazing...definitely the best..if guys turn out to be like that so sensitive n tender..world would seem too perfect :))) great work..

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  4. one add on:

    i love u not for what u are but for what i am when i am with you...

    srsly yaar bht achi hai...its been like i hvnt been with her since ages...but still het thoughts haunt me...the feel of her touch titillates me..i still yen for her care her attention...the only thing i care for her is her happiness...the only clause was that i wanted to give her all the happiness...and i know i can keep her happy this life...:)

    bht achi hai post..keep the gud wrk going..

    - may be the one for whom the post is written..:)

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  5. Reading this I am reminded of Hasrat Mohani's,ghazal "chupke chupke raat din..."
    You deserve kudos for the lovely post!

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  6. pela hai nipun bhai.. abe ye post padhke to koi bhi ladki haan keh degi.. :D par sahi sentiments hain...this feeling is nothing less dan heaven..
    kudos for being able to pen down these feelings..

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  7. i love u for nt bein d perfect girl u hav 2 b..coz wen i move d veil of imperfectn away..i c d perfect one behind d curtain..as d one u r and u shud b......yeh bhi add kar le

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  8. am stealing some of the lines..hope its not copyrighted...

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  9. "I love u not for what u are but for what I am when I am with you..."

    one of the best ones from nipun and one of the best i have ever heard.

    @ nipun: only a person who has traveled to a place can describe its beauty.. and only a person who wants to travel will imagine its beauty in the manner told..

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  10. To start with it is a really touching and emotional one and one of the best romantic posts i have seen..
    There is something in this post that takes the reader to the times when he was in love..n all the things he selflessly wanted to do for his beloved...All the intricate details of daily life are beautifully depicted..
    And yes, there is a sense of honesty in the post which makes the reader believe that true love in this world really exists...
    All Credit to you for coming up with such a gr8 work...keep it up !!

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  11. Your views are lovely.. Couldn't have imagined such pure feelings coming from a guy before reading this..
    Cheers for the vivid description in the entire article.. Hope people imbibe selfless thoughts like these in themselves too!!!

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